学术英文,认真写好
Academic English, done properly.
Writing and editing for graduate applicants, researchers, and academic professionals — by one person, since 2019. 为研究生申请者、学术研究人员及专业人士提供英文写作与润色服务——由一人完成,自2019年起。
I am an academic writing consultant with professional-level academic English, affiliated with a QS top-60 research university as both staff and alumni. Based in Amsterdam, I have advised and supported 200+ students from bachelor through PhD level, with placements at leading institutions including Ivy League universities and top-ranked programmes across the US, UK, Europe, Asia, and Oceania. 我是一位学术英文写作顾问,具备专业学术英语水平,以员工及校友身份隶属一所QS前60研究型大学,现居阿姆斯特丹。自2019年起,我已为200余名从本科到博士阶段的学生提供写作支持与申请辅导,客户成功录取的院校涵盖美国、英国、欧洲、亚洲及大洋洲的顶尖高校,包括常春藤盟校在内的众多知名大学。
My background spans political science, international relations, Asian studies, and human geography — I work comfortably across the social sciences, humanities, business, and interdisciplinary fields. Every document is written by me personally. All client materials are treated as strictly confidential and are never retained or reused after the engagement ends. 我的学术背景涵盖政治学、国际关系、亚洲研究及人文地理学,擅长处理社会科学、人文学科、商科及跨学科领域的文书。每份文书均由我本人亲自撰写,客户资料严格保密,合作结束后不留存、不转作他用。
A representative passage showing how a draft is transformed — original text, revisions, and the reasoning behind each change.以下为一段代表性润色示例,展示草稿如何被改写——包括原文、修改内容及修改说明。
I am excited about the opportunity to enroll in the PhD program at the University of Michigan because I believe it will provide me with the excellent knowledge and rigorous research experience that I need to further cement my academic foundation. The PhD program at the University of Michigan offers precisely the research environment I need to develop as an independent scholar in human factors engineering. Opening restructured: removed self-focused framing ("I am excited", "I believe") and generic claims ("excellent knowledge"). The revised sentence leads with the programme's value and names the specific field.开头重构:删去以自我为中心的表达("我很兴奋"、"我相信")及泛泛之词("优质知识"),改为以项目价值开篇,并明确研究领域。
I am particularly interested in the research of Dr. Jessie Yang, whose work on interpreting driver performance and improving the interaction systems of automated driving aligns closely with my interests and background. Kept. Specific, well-targeted, and demonstrates genuine research fit. No changes needed.保留。内容具体,表达了真实的研究契合度,无需修改。
I believe that this program is the perfect stepping stone for me to become a leading figure in the field of human factors and contribute to groundbreaking innovations that will make our lives and societies better equipped for the future. My goal is to develop validated models of driver behaviour under automation that can inform real-world system design — research I intend to continue beyond the PhD in an academic or applied research setting. Closing rewritten: "perfect stepping stone", "leading figure", "groundbreaking innovations", and "better equipped for the future" are generic phrases that appear in thousands of SOPs. Replaced with a specific, credible research goal and career direction.结尾重写:"完美跳板"、"领军人物"、"突破性创新"等表达在数千份SOP中均有出现,缺乏辨识度。替换为具体、可信的研究目标和职业方向。
Every document is available at three tiers — click any service to see the breakdown.每类文书均提供三种服务层级——点击查看详情。
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 Language corrections on your draft语法、词汇、行文润色 | ¥1,500 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 Full structural and language editing结构重组与语言全面润色 | ¥2,500 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 From scratch — intake, outline, complete draft从零开始——采集、大纲、全文撰写 | ¥4,500 | 3 |
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 Language corrections on a supplied draft对已有初稿进行语言润色 | ¥600 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 Structural and language rework结构与语言全面改写 | ¥1,000 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 Written from intake — sounds like the signatory从资料采集到成稿,文风贴合推荐人 | ¥1,200 / letter封 | 3 |
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 | ¥600 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 | ¥1,000 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 | ¥1,200 | 3 |
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 | ¥1,200 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 | ¥2,000 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 | ¥3,500 | 3 |
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 | ¥1,200 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 | ¥2,000 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 | ¥3,800 | 3 |
| Tier层级 | Price价格 | Revisions修改 |
|---|---|---|
| Edit润色 | ¥500 | 1 |
| Rewrite重写 | ¥800 | 2 |
| Full Writing全程写作 | ¥1,000 / letter封 | 3 |
Journal papers, dissertation chapters, research proposals — edited for language, academic register, and argument flow. Priced by length and complexity. 期刊论文、毕业论文章节、研究计划——针对语言、学术语体及论证逻辑进行润色。按篇幅与复杂程度定价。
Enquire for a quote询价The most commonly requested documents bundled at a discount. All Full Writing tier.最常用的文书组合打包,统一按全程写作层级,享受折扣。
Everything is handled directly between us — no intermediaries, no handoffs.全程由我本人跟进,无中间环节,无任何转手。
A selection of feedback from clients, with their outcomes.部分客户的真实反馈,附申请结果。
Harvard was my first choice, but I was rejected for lack of work experience. He didn't let me give up — he pivoted my strategy, and I was subsequently accepted to Berkeley and Johns Hopkins. Truly amazing support.哈佛是我最初的目标,但因工作经验不足被拒。他没有让我放弃——调整了申请策略,后来我拿到了Berkeley和Johns Hopkins的录取。真的很感谢。
Other agencies had no idea Helsinki required a separate entrance exam — I only found out because he told me in advance. I registered for the April exam in time and got through. More knowledgeable than anyone else I've worked with.其他中介根本不知道赫尔辛基要单独参加入学考试——还是他提前告诉我的。我及时报了四月份的考试,顺利通过。他对申请流程的了解程度,我没有见过第二个。
I sent over my revised content in the morning and had the final Harvard PS back the same afternoon. The turnaround was genuinely impressive, and the quality matched.早上发过去修改内容,下午就收到了定稿。速度让我没想到,质量也没有因此打折扣。
My research is in English for Academic Purposes and language acquisition. The consultant delivered a detailed outline, refined it until everything was right — a few months later I received an offer from Bath.我的研究方向是学术英语与语言习得,本来很难讲清楚切入角度。他帮我从头梳理研究计划,反复打磨,几个月后我拿到了Bath的博士录取。
你太给力了 — the reference letters and personal statement were delivered promptly and with real care. Every detail was attended to. I truly appreciate how much effort went into getting it right.你太给力了——推荐信和个人陈述都按时交付,做得很认真。每一个细节都照顾到了,真的很感谢你花了这么多心思。
I'd been told by a potential supervisor at Melbourne that my experience wasn't strong enough. He rewrote everything — more accurate, more compelling, under 600 words. The revised version made a real difference.Melbourne的导师告诉我,我的背景不够有说服力。他把简历重新写了一遍——更准确、更有力、控制在600字以内。修改后的版本确实起了作用。
I'd been struggling to frame my political science research for months. He helped me build the proposal from scratch — clear research questions, a coherent theoretical framework, a literature positioning that made sense. UQ came back with an offer within six weeks.我在东南亚威权政治这个方向上卡了好几个月,就是找不到合适的理论框架。他帮我从头搭建研究计划——研究问题清晰,理论框架完整,文献定位也说得通。六周后UQ给了录取。
Reach out with a brief description of what you need. I usually respond within 24–36 hours.简要描述你的需求,我通常在24至36小时内回复。